WWW: you have explored some interesting ideas that are based on the work of photographers you have researched.
EBI: make sure you upload all images used to create your manipulated photos. Explain and record the process of editing. You should now start to refine your ideas. I will address this by taking a screenshot of my work in photoshop, and the editing process, then upload the images along with the final piece.
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WWW: Shoot 1 has a good balance of humour good thought behind it.
EBI: Re-shoot to get the angles of the signs correct. I will re-shoot this photo-shoot and re-upload the images to my website in order to show improvement. WWW: this is very confident piece of writing. You have made some excellent connections to your own ideas and made some very good observations of the images. Well done!!
EBI: Could you be more specific with your ideas? Be very literal in describing your intentions. I have addressed this by re-reading my critical analysis of Robert Rickhoff and my plan for my photoshoot. I have since edited my plan for my photoshoot, where previously I had just stated my intentions, but had not explained how I would do it or the ideas I could do that would be similar to that of Robert Rickhoff. An exciting and promising start to your project. Ideas feel confident and are supported through some images.
To improve: critical analysis is very important. You should find a photographer that supports your ideas and critically analyse their work in depth. Check for grammar and punctuation. To address this I have: Thoroughly researched a photographer that does Repetitive photography, I have chosen to research Maurizio Galimberti Some really pleasing and effective research into melting/rotting foods. This gives a strong focus to your ideas. To improve: you must start to evidence the timelapse aspect to demonstrate your knowledge and understanding. Complete at least 2 photoshoots to experiment with timelpase processing. Mock Exam: Chosen Question: Groups/repetition AO1: 0 AO2: 7 AO3: 9 AO4: 0 Total: 16 Feedback: An exciting and promising start to your project. Ideas feel confident and are supported through some images. To improve: critical analysis is very important. You should find a photographer that supports your ideas and critically analyse their work in depth. Check for grammar and punctuation. What Have I done to address this? To address this feedback I have copied my critical analysis of Maurizio Galimberti from my 'Artist Profiles' page. This is now available to view on my Repetition page. WWW: Some evidence of research and evaluation of your work.
EBI: Missing coursework. Your Alphabet project is not on your website. Make sure you upload your work to the appropriate project page. AO1: Research into photographers - 0 AO2: Experimenting - O AO3: Recording ideas - 3 AO4: Final Piece - O CG: 3 - U Feedback: Some good initial ideas with a supporting image. A bit of a limiting start to your project. Elaborate on your ideas by adding more details, to include possible technique to explore and more images that have inspired you. Support your ideas with a moodboard. Could you also change the theme of your website? Student Response: I am disappointed with the grade I achieved, therefore I will use more information and write more in depth in order to achieve my target grade. |
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